[译] 不服从这一命令的士兵将受到惩罚。
[误] The soldiers who are not in obedience of the order will be punished.

[正] The soldiers who are not in obedience to the order will be punished.
[注] 表示“服从……”，应该说 be in obedience to...，其中介词 to 不能改成 of。