[译] 很快地，他就在舞台成了名。
[误] He soon make a fame for himself on the stage.

[正] He soon make a reputation for himself on the stage.
[注] fame 是不可数名词，前面不能用不定冠词，也不和动词 make 搭配，"成名"可以用 make(或 build up) a reputation, come to fame 或 achieve fame。如: He had achieve no fame, no success. 他没有获得名望和成功。